tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21103988.post115870907482892379..comments2024-03-27T19:11:31.682-05:00Comments on -Mayden's Voyage: Apatheia Chap 3: "Distraction"Mayden' s Voyagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03169575773884459343noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21103988.post-1158884914692986892006-09-21T19:28:00.000-05:002006-09-21T19:28:00.000-05:00cora-great chapter! y'know what? i think my 'suspe...cora-great chapter! y'know what? i think my 'suspense' is ended here...but, i'd love it if you made this story longer, just cuz it's so good!Libbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04873518747021842739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21103988.post-1158863772755944322006-09-21T13:36:00.000-05:002006-09-21T13:36:00.000-05:00Dang! How come he didn't fix the screen thing that...Dang! How come he didn't fix the screen thing that keeps out the critters?<BR/>And, if it's small enough t'fit through one of the blinds, then just how big IS this serpent?<BR/><BR/>I'm a lil less worried bought the serpent and more worried about how Clara's fixin' her hair up just to go back to the drugstore...especially since what it takes is tomatoe juice and vinegar. Oh, it won't smell too awful good after, but, ivy leaves a resin that can be cut with acidic substances.<BR/><BR/>uh...<BR/>I'm getting too much out'a this, ain't I?bonemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01615987464724590203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21103988.post-1158858348761882182006-09-21T12:05:00.000-05:002006-09-21T12:05:00.000-05:00Apathy is very destructive. We have to find a way...Apathy is very destructive. We have to find a way to not care about it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21103988.post-1158815116430565812006-09-21T00:05:00.000-05:002006-09-21T00:05:00.000-05:00that makes sense...the greener the grass is...the ...that makes sense...the greener the grass is...the more bs it's got...words ov' wisdomfrom schuami...ey' Cora...how are ya???...write to you tomorrow...sleep tight tonight...it's 1:04 pm here...Lady Prismhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04333352060797182573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21103988.post-1158802384738814402006-09-20T20:33:00.000-05:002006-09-20T20:33:00.000-05:00Nice post.Not enough high heels for my taste.Nice post.<BR/>Not enough high heels for my taste.Crashtest Comichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04548428734581389272noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21103988.post-1158801748924509502006-09-20T20:22:00.000-05:002006-09-20T20:22:00.000-05:00of course greener grass is full of b.s./err manure...of course greener grass is full of b.s./err manure, that's why folks are often fooled by it...:).....................https://www.blogger.com/profile/13829766058760599443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21103988.post-1158787825936747312006-09-20T16:30:00.000-05:002006-09-20T16:30:00.000-05:00Velvet- things are about to speed up- hopefully ch...Velvet- things are about to speed up- hopefully chap 4 will be shorter :)<BR/><BR/>Lux- Oh- I imagine, like me, she drives the car everywhere :)<BR/><BR/>Schaumi~ Greener grass, as I am finding, just means there's more poop in the soil! :)<BR/><BR/>K9- May such a thing never be said of me! :) (wait...too late! lol!)<BR/>I'm kidding. T has never said that! Somebody else has- but not him. I'll give him another 6 months :)<BR/><BR/>X~ Thank you. This has been a very good exercise for me- I've never written anything like this. A good friend and author is giving it a critical read and telling me (brutally, of course!) what I could do better. It's nice. Thank you...I hope the ending will be surprising.Mayden' s Voyagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03169575773884459343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21103988.post-1158780463346230042006-09-20T14:27:00.000-05:002006-09-20T14:27:00.000-05:00I'm gonna suspend any anticipation for what comes ...I'm gonna suspend any anticipation for what comes next in this story. I will say, however, it's unfolding nicely. You've had decent exposition to explore the areas outside of the house, away from the snake, and the divorced dad and the poison ivy are moving the plot forward. Very good.X. Dellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17561609651507566271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21103988.post-1158759833355190392006-09-20T08:43:00.000-05:002006-09-20T08:43:00.000-05:00/bark bark barkthis reminds me of an old internet .../bark bark bark<BR/><BR/>this reminds me of an old internet joke that went around...a picture of a great lookin' babe in a bikini and the caption read: <BR/><BR/>somewhere, some guy...... is tired of her sh*t!<BR/><BR/>that is the truth every which way ya got.<BR/><BR/>mayden, im gone for the weekend! <BR/>*circle tail (or as boney calls it airplane tail) wag*<BR/><BR/>/howlsparringK9https://www.blogger.com/profile/08031137344229440004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21103988.post-1158750723408334452006-09-20T06:12:00.000-05:002006-09-20T06:12:00.000-05:00...looks like this woman is starting to develop a ......looks like this woman is starting to develop a "the grass is greener on the other side" case........................https://www.blogger.com/profile/13829766058760599443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21103988.post-1158732650801966352006-09-20T01:10:00.000-05:002006-09-20T01:10:00.000-05:00I wonder if she drives the car going to the drugst...I wonder if she drives the car going to the drugstore...gas costs...My husband always tells me to make a list..so i don't keep going back and forth...I do make the list..but by the time I make it to the store I discover I left the list back at home...you should see the look on his face when I tell him this ha!ha!ha!ha!ha!Lady Prismhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04333352060797182573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21103988.post-1158729343515683372006-09-20T00:15:00.000-05:002006-09-20T00:15:00.000-05:00and the suspense builds up ... as apathy infects t...and the suspense builds up ... as apathy infects this seemingly happy home.<BR/><BR/>now i can hardly wait to read chapter 4!<BR/><BR/>thanx for this!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com